Editing Services

Get the same quality editing as Hunter S. Thompson in Hell’s Angels.

Hunter often said [Margaret] was the best editor he ever worked with and they were close friends—William McKeen, author of Outlaw Journalist

I have been an editor for decades. I get very absorbed in it. Each work is personal and receives my undivided attention. In my days at Random House I copyedited  or was assistant editor on some New York Times best sellers; some were reviewed on the front cover of the Times Sunday book review section. A book in which I worked with the author in his law offices for a month – on the censorship of The Trials of Lady Chatterley, Tropic of Cancer, and Fanny Hill – won the George Polk Award for journalism. More recently, an indie author I did developmental editing with won first place in indie nonfiction for his political analysis book. Yet if I think we are a fit, my prices are reasonable.

This very day, July 2023, I received the following lovely testimonial:

Margaret is worth her weight in gold. She had tons of great feedback for me, she challenged me where appropriate, and she really dug in, adding value beyond what I would have expected it. She communicated promptly and well, and I really felt like she was a thought partner for me. If I could sum it up – I felt that she felt a sense of ownership over the work. That’s the type of person you want in your corner. The book was elevated for her involvement and I’m forever grateful to her for that.

Paul Karvanis, The Happy Lawyer, https://leaderrising.com

Watch your book come into shape

Peacocks at Owl Farm

I love to see a book come into shape–an idea emerge out of a paragraph where it wasn’t there before: where the paragraph was pretty drab. And suddenly it has a lot to say.

This is just a quick note to THANK YOU again for everything you’ve done to help me with my book! I’m more excited than I can possibly express – and grateful – for the book hitting #1 Bestseller in 2 categories yesterday, in both ebook and paperback formats: #1 in String Instruments (ebook), #1 in Musical Philosophy and Social Aspects (paperback). It also hit #2 in two more categories, and #4 in the other two. So, it was in the top 5 for ALL SIX categories – WOW!!! Thank you again for helping to make this possible.

Jennifer Roig-Francoli, Make Great Music with Ease!

Whether you have barely started your book and need developmental editing or are a polished writer and need “final edits,” I can help.  And whether you barely need your words touched at all or need a lot of “line editing,” we can work together. For instance, a painter writing on art history under contract with Random House, confided to me, “I don’t understand words.” (He was visual.) But I noticed that if I asked what he meant – by a dense, confusing sentence – a fascinating buried idea that sat on the page without communicating revealed itself. In the Acknowledgments, he thanked me for “a prodigy of rewriting almost beyond belief.” However, it remained his book, his ideas, even his Voice.

This is an extreme case. For the most part, I simply “EDIT.”

Whenever I tackle a manuscript, I never lose sight of that – most important –  fact that there’s a Voice waiting to be supported: to stand out. If it’s not your voice that speaks, the reader will most likely lose interest.

One of the most satisfying reasons to write is to wrestle with material, sweat out the blank moments, and eventually, proudly give an audience a book. I can help you do that.

I particularly love this gratifying testimonial I just received, unsolicited:

That manuscript was turned into a readable book by my editor, Margaret Harrell, who helped me do more showing and less telling. She is the warm fuzziness to my cold scientific creepiness and is more than just an editor; she has become a writing mentor. – Amy Rosner, PhD, author of Reconstructing Reality (soon to be released)

Below is a list of various levels of editing you can choose from:

  • telephone/Zoom consultation
  • manuscript evaluation
  • developmental editing—if your book is not yet finished
  • basic content editing (most popular) – includes line editing and as a bonus, copy editing

Once you contact me, for free I’ll give you pointers on how to proceed and do a sample edit – complimentary (free).

Developmental editing is recommended when your content needs developing. Say, you have not developing the chapters.

Basic Content editing includes line editing, content scrutiny, etc., after you have a basic manuscript finished and it needs an editor’s eye got tightening, etc.

Copyediting (part of the editing levels above, no extra charge) comes after your manuscript is finished. This is where I look at grammar, punctuation, inconsistencies, light line editing.

Below, an example illustrates how cutting dead words brings a scene alive:

I [must have]told Hunter this, which [then] drew forth his response: “Margaret, you talk the craziest of anyone I know.A pause.[And]I feel like I’m talking to a naked child.” But he didn’t say it dismissively.

The prices for basic content editing (two complete rounds) is .03/word. I have not raised it for several years (even with inflation). If you need three or four rounds of editing, the price is .04/word. And if you need extensive developmental editing, coming to me with a book only partially written, the price varies on an individual basis. If you prefer for small jobs, you can request my $55 hourly rate. Each fee is customized on the basis of manuscript length and readiness for publication.

POST EDITING OPTION: After the editing is done, what happens next? What type of publication are you aiming for: traditional or self-publishing? I’ll offer you some free tips on indie publishing if that’s your route. If you want to search for an agent, I can give you some tips or I can edit your Query Letter and Proposal.

Since updating this page a year ago, I’ve edited dozens of books for Self-Publishing School and received dozens of tiptop reviews. Most are not below. But to give a few examples:

I wanted to celebrate you today 👏💝🙏🏻. 12 months ago today I received back from you the first edited copy of my manuscript. WOW! I am so grateful to you –making my words dance on the pages of my book.

Since publishing last August Above the Turbulence has gone to over 8 countries, has entered the prison cells across America and is truly touching the lives of many for good. That was my prayer. How wonderful. God heard and is faithful. Thank you so much for walking that journey with me.

CAROLYN DECK

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Man Cave of Health: A Why-To Book About Men’s Health: Through The Eyes of a Health Coach Who’s Heard It All, author, LaRue Palmer, writes:

 Great work all around. You have transformed me into a better writer, and for the first time, an AUTHOR! Thank you for giving me my start. I am forever in your debt.

 

Some Nonfiction and Fiction Project

Published to sensational reviews:

Freak Kingdom— Hachette Book Group

In this perceptive, dramatic book, Tim Denevi recounts the moment when Thompson found his calling. As the Kennedy assassination and the turmoil of the 60s paved the way for Richard Nixon, Thompson greeted him with two very powerful emotions: fear and loathing. In his fevered effort to take down what he saw as a rising dictator, Thompson made a kind of Faustian bargain, taking the drugs he needed to meet newspaper deadlines and pushing himself beyond his natural limits. For ten years, he cast aside his old ambitions, troubled his family, and likely hastened his own decline, along the way producing some of the best political writing in our history.

This remarkable biography reclaims Hunter Thompson for the enigmatic true believer he was: not a punchline or a cartoon character, but a fierce, colorful opponent of fascism in a country that suddenly seemed all too willing to accept it.

About his experience with Margaret on this book:

Margaret Harrell is a world-class editor whose attention to every aspect of my writing—from prose to context to character development to factual accuracy and thematic movement—was invaluable in the composition and completion of my most recent book, a biography on Hunter S. Thompson.  Whether you’re working on nonfiction or a novel, she brings to your project a wealth of generosity and talent and insight that’s unparalleled. —Tim Denevi, Associate Professor, MFA, George Mason University 

Read Salon‘s excerpt on the 1968 Democratic National Convention in Chicago from Freak Kingdom

SAMPLE TESTIMONIALS:

I’ve just finished editing my book with Margaret Harrell. She has been absolutely amazing. She has turned my waffle into short sharp punchy sentences that gets the message across clearer than I could have ever imagined AND reduced my word count by about 8,000 words. After one zoom call, she understood what I was wanting to achieve, gave me constructive feedback and allowed me the space to re-create areas of my book that weren’t working. I’m so happy with my end result. Margaret’s expertise and experience are clearly extensive and I’m so glad she was able to work on my book. Margaret . . . thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

 

Nikki Lane

 

 

 

 


Vesa Lumielle Atlantis novel
A House of Smoke and Mirrors – Annie Berkley

 

A House of Smoke and Mirrors by Annie Berkley – a memoir

Thank you so much! I never could have pulled this story together without your help!

Few people can write such a book. It has to have been lived. To tell us the story, Annie had to reenter a sexually abusive childhood, the tragic abuse of a five-year-old, and turn it into vivid drama, an inspiration to all survivors. The result reads like a movie. But it’s true, every word, every scene.

Fred Grover Jr., MD 

Awakening Gaia – Dr. Fred Grover Jr.
Dr. Fred Grover – Spiritual Genomics

Spiritual Genomics: A physician’s deep dive beyond modern medicine, discovering unique keys to optimizing DNA health, longevity, and happiness!

The subtitle says it all. Fred combines a wealth of material – a holistic and spiritual, experiential perspective matched with his medical training and  years of teaching at the University of Colorado. Check out his website, where the slogan is “Experience the RevolutionaryMD Difference!” And the book website. Thanks to  Fred for this generous Acknowledgment: “So much gratitude goes out to my editor, Margaret A. Harrell, who helped me maintain momentum and provided amazing editorial assistance throughout this long journey.” 

Awakening Gaia: The Lemurian Crystal Grid

 

 

Fred takes you on a journey of planetary shamanism as he taps into higher-dimensional insights and flows with magical synchronicities to place Lemurian crystals and sacred geometric forms around the world. His ultimate goal is to counter the darkness in our world by re-activating, re-connecting and radiating ancient healing energies and grids of the Incas, Mayas, Native Americans, Polynesians and more.” What a joy to be part of the birth of these two books!

Denise Kane, Butterfly Reiki founder

The Violet Flame: A Game Changer

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Margaret is timely and gets the material back faster than I can make a cup of tea. She is knowledegable and experienced with the ins and outs of book publishing and can easily read in between the lines. How does she do that??? And she has common sense and intuition to tune into her authors and lend a helping hand in a way they need most.

Testimonials, Reviews, Awards

Nonfiction Developmental Editing

Soul Body Fusion

Testimonial: # 1
My professional and loving editor, Margaret Harrell, was always there when I needed her. She made the solo job of a writer become a partnership.
—Jonette Crowley, Author of Soul Body Fusion: The Missing Piece for Healing and Beyond. Translated into Dutch, German, Romanian, Norwegian, Estonian, Polish, Danish, Swedish, and counting
Review: I was mesmerized and transformed with Ms. Crowley’s energy that permeated the pages . . .
Inspiration: It is not only what you produce in your life, but how your greater life produces a greater YOU . . . that in turn produces a greater world. —MARK, channeled by Jonette

Stupidparty: Math v. Myth

Testimonial # 2

A very special acknowledgment to my editor, Margaret Harrell, with an expertise and unique talent, no doubt burgeoning through her fascinating life experiences and working with truly notable writers, goes beyond the call of duty. Fate brought her to my assistance.
—Patrick Andendall, author of Stupidparty: Math v. Myth, the 2015 Award Winner of the National Indie Excellence Book Award (Politics)

Reviews:

It is possibly the funnest book with an agenda ever published. —Breeni Books
A brilliant book, complete with clickable details to verify the author’s veracity. —Thom Hartmann, New York Times best-selling author of The Crash of 2016

Late Bulletin: Patrick has a THIRD political book just out of the editing stage and into design – to come out, in 2018. The second in the political trilogy was Who Is Jeb!!!: John Ellis “Jeb” Bush and his Horrendously Horrible Histories. These projects, like the first, involved “developmental editing”; in the process, Who is Jeb? doubled in size. Expect the newest book later in the year.

This Is Not for You

Testimonial # 3
I cannot thank you enough for working with me.
—Venus Soileau, author of This Is Not for You—a memoir

Samples of Copyedited Novels

The novels below were already finished when they came to me in manuscript. They could get straight to copyediting, which might range from character, plot, and language questions to excellence of writing, fact checking, consistencies, and the minutiae of spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Whatever the degree of copyediting needed (heavy or light), a reader can tell whether the book went through that process.

Soul of the Sun

Testimonial #4
Thank you so much for this lovely voyage! . . . I learned so much . . .
Vesa M. Lumielle, author of Soul of the Sun—poetry and magical realism
Review: “After all, we live the illusion of reality” is the sentence that I would say sums the book up best. Reads very well, and poetry is magnificent.

Essie’s House

Testimonial # 5
I’d like to thank two individuals who helped Essie’s House to life . . . Margaret Harrell—whose enthusiasm, insights and suggestions helped tighten the story and smooth the rough edges.
—Robert Meyerson

Rodeo of Doom

Testimonial # 6
You’ve been such a big help and I appreciate it so much.
Miguel Lasala included in his novel an “Editor’s Note” by me (he wrote), to add to the Hunter Thompson/Fear and Loathing-like flavor.
Review: [In] Rodeo of Doom . . .  author Miguel Lasala reveals his craft by intricately weaving in fine details for his readers and keeps you anxiously anticipating what will happen next.

The End of Obscenity: The Trials of Lady Chatterley, Tropic of Cancer, and Fanny Hill

Developmental editing–an Early Nonfiction Classic

The End of Obscenity: The Trials of Lady Chatterley, Tropic of Cancer, and Fanny Hill by the Lawyer Who Defended Them is dear to my heart. Random House considered it an important book, and to edit it, I was “loaned out”—assigned to go to the law offices of the high-profile author, Charles (Cy) Rembar, every day for roughly a couple of months. There, I sat at a big table with Rembar, and morning to night (ordering in lunch and taking an evening break for dinner at a nearby Sixth Avenue restaurant), we organized his pile of chapters, which began as stand-alone texts, into a flowing book. It’s also because of Rembar, in part, that I wound up having a private conversation with his first cousin Norman Mailer in a Greenwich Village loft and pondered the prospect of editing Mailer’s introduction.

Read my blog on “The Time I Almost Edited Norman Mailer.”

Acknowledgments: Cy Rembar
To: Margaret Ann Harrell, a gifted book-tuner—a lass with a delicate ear

Review:

Rembar’s book deals not with the why of obscenity laws but with the how, and as a result often has a freshness that little recent writing on this subject can match. Rembar’s is still the best book on that kind of censorship.

I am also glad to help you navigate through the publication process.
I love helping you improve your craft.

What we have to be aware of is that the creation of serious literature—whatever the degree of collaboration between author and editor—is the result of enormously concentrated mental and aesthetic effort. If it is reduced to a series of narrative effects slapped on to paper or screen, if it comes to be seen simply as one among many interchangeable ways to ingest a story, it will soon begin to look like a very poor slice of the leisure industry indeed.—Alex Clark, The Guardian, “The Lost Art of Editing,” February 11, 2011

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